October 30

Week 2- Activity 4

Looking to post comments on I decided to post on our own class.

Jason’s blog- http://jasonhahn1902.edublogs.org/

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Hey Jason,
I would agree with these statements you said about yourself. Knowing you as a friend, you can be outspoken and really funny. One thing that stands out to me is that you are pretty similar in class and online. In class, you are pretty much focused and make sure you do the right thing. I don’t know what you are like online so I am going to go with what you say about yourself online.
Come check out my blog-
https://jeremyblye.edublogs.org
-Jeremy

Daniela’s blog- http://danieaflal2002.edublogs.org/

Hey Daniela,
I think this avatar really represents you. There is one question I have. Why is there only descriptions about what you look like and wear? Could you possibly add more about your personalities?
Come check out my blog,
https://jeremyblye.edublogs.org
-Jeremy

Emily’s blog- http://emilysalva9501.edublogs.org/

Hi Emily,
What you wrote is something new for me. Personally, I do not know you well and this really showed me who you are. I would agree with the fact that you are always upbeat because whenever I see you, you are in a great mood.
Come check out my blog,
https://jeremyblye.edublogs.org
-Jeremy

Jaden’s blog- http://jadenjp3.edublogs.org/

Hi Jaden,
I’ve never known you on online, but I can sure agree about what you say about yourself offline. Especially with your friends. All you do is talk, talk, and talk which is what you have explained yourself. I guess you can be shy at times, but that is rare. What makes me laugh is the fact that you try to be careful to what you say when you just say it.
Come check out my blog,
https://jeremyblye.edublogs.org
-Jeremy

October 30

Week 3 Activity 1- Favorite Family Event

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One event that has to be one of my favorite with my family is going to Disneyland. One thing I bet you are all thinking is, really. Disneyland. Well it wasn’t because of the rides or being there. This was mainly because of everyone was getting along for a whole day. It was nice to have my brother not arguing with my mom which made my mom upset. Then she would get mad at the smallest action I did. We would all get mad at each other, but this day was perfect for me. Everyone was enjoying the day and what happened for a first was that my brother actually smiled!

(Anyone has permission to use this picture in their blog).

 

October 30

Week 3- Activity 2

Since I was not able to find any pictures of my relatives that have died, I chose to write about Robin Williams.

This man committed suicide which was very depressing, yet he was someone pretty hilarious. Whenever I was young, I would watch his movies and I loved them so much. For example, some main movies I saw were JumanjiRV, Night at the Museum, and Flubber. Even nowadays I will still watch his movies from every now and then. The main reason I chose Robin Williams is that he was someone I knew of well when I was young and that he isn’t here anymore. His decision to end his life was very depressing, but we all know he is in a better place now.

October 30

Week 2- Activity 1

Through this activity, we were asked to complete a practice comment on Ms.W’s page. This is what I wrote.

Dear Ms. W,
So far I have enjoyed completing these blog challenges. Completing these challenges helps me become stronger in blogging and writing as one person. Sometimes, I have trouble with these things and ask people for help, but now it is all up to me to figure everything out.
https://jeremyblye.edublogs.org
Here is the url to my blog.

Thanks,
Jeremy

October 30

Week 2- Activity 2

For Week 2- Activity 2, I commented on Ms. Smith’s page with this comment

One guideline of commenting that really stuck out to me was your conventions of a comment. Always in writing, texting and comments I see OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I agree that with doing this it makes no sense. Does it mean you are just that much more excited about a subject than someone else. Also, the fact that when commenting people use i, u, lol. I like the fact that you have pointed it out since so many people use texting language in their everyday lives. Another thing I have noticed is when people don’t revise their blogging or comments. It just makes a blog or comment look horrible. I read Liam’s blog and I loved the fact he loves pets. He reminds me of my family with a zoo of animals. Five cats, a dog, a hermit crab, and two aquariums.
Come check out my blog here-
https://jeremyblye.edublogs.org
Thanks,
JeremyB.

October 30

How to Comment

Commenting-

Commenting should be something to connect with others and to give advice. Mainly when you are trying to comment, think of being yourself and not who you aren’t. What I mean is reply how you would talk to others in real life, but be safe while doing this. Don’t give out personal information such as date of birth, address, last name, or daily routines you complete. Also, when commenting don’t seem like a hostile person, but seem friendly. Lets say you disagree with someone else. When you disagree, don’t be rude about it and just state why. When a comment is made it needs to be on topic because when one is off topic, there is no point for it. Leaving a question for whoever the person is will start a back and forth conversation. One idea you need think of while commenting is your conventions (grammar). For example, don’t put everything capitalized. This will make the person think you are yelling, and use one exclamation mark. We get it you are excited!!!!!!!! See how irrelevant it is having this many exclamation marks.

 

Here are some guidelines you should remember when commenting

-Make PRIVACY! Don’t tell random people where you LIVE!

-Try to start a conversation

-Ask questions

-Be a happy camper (back off the negativity)

-Be as polite as you can be

-Aim away from saying just “Hi” and “visit my blog” ; make it thoughtful

-Don’t use lol, i, u, ur, etc.

-Make sure you have your blog url in your comment so others can look at your blog!

October 27

Hello, Who Am I- Activity One

To say that I am the same person online and in real life is somewhat true. In my life and online, I don’t enjoy being the center of attention or sticking out, but I like being included. Explaining me in one word, it would be adventurous. I’ve never had a blog like this before and I don’t really know what I will be like. I only use one social media and in it, I don’t post much. What I hope is that I am a sweet, creative person that I am in real life.

October 27

Hello, Who Are You- Activity Three

Things you may or may not know about me-

1. I play violin, cello, piano, and guitar.

2. I currently own five cats, one dog, two aquariums, and one hermit crab.

3. I enjoy to mainly play soccer and football.

4. The fastest I biked thirteen miles was in about one hour and ten minutes.

5. I hiked up Nevada Falls in Yosemite.

6. I have never been in snow.

7. One of my favorite foods are Pop Tarts.

8. Even though they are a horrible team, I am a loyal Oakland Raiders fan.

9. I like being nice to others.

10. Every year for my birthday, I go to California Pizza Kitchen for dinner.